Hi Joshua. My name is Les and I go to Red Hill School, I like the way you did the fight presentation next time you could of made the a bit video longer and better not slow because it looks fake not real.
Hi Joshua. My name is Zayden and i go to Red Hill School,I like how you made it slow motiony. Next time can you try make it clear so people who see actually see it.Have a great holiday!
Hi Joshua. My name is Qais from Waikowhai primary school.I really liked the way you have taken the video really steady.Next time you should add what the fight was about. If you would like to see my blog go to wpsqaiso.blogspot.co.nz.
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Hi Joshua.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Les and I go to Red Hill School, I like the way you did the fight presentation next time you could of made the a bit video longer and better not slow because it looks fake not real.
Hi Joshua.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zayden and i go to Red Hill School,I like how you made it slow motiony. Next time can you try make it clear so people who see actually see it.Have a great holiday!
Hi Joshua. My name is Qais from Waikowhai primary school.I really liked the way you have taken the video really steady.Next time you should add what the fight was about. If you would like to see my blog go to wpsqaiso.blogspot.co.nz.
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