Hi Joshua, my name is Flynn from Wakowhai Primary School. I like how you had a lot of detail in the story. It made me think of a natural disaster. Maybe next time you could put a photo in.
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Hi Joshua, my name is Flynn from Wakowhai Primary School. I like how you had a lot of detail in the story. It made me think of a natural disaster. Maybe next time you could put a photo in.
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